Okay, time to start the cavalcade of redlined resumes. For starters, since I have a crappy version of Adobe here at home, I've printed the resumes and hand-marked them in red. I've scanned all the documents in black and white for a two reasons: one, you can see my red marks better on a black-and-white page; and two, your beautiful color resume may end up getting printed by someone with a crappy, B&W-only printer (I know, you'd think everyone's caught up by now) or faxed (and fax machines generally only print in B&W--horrors!) I've marked out names and addresses as well as places you've worked, but I left schools in. To read the JPGs of the resumes, double-click on them and they'll open in a separate window at a larger size.
(Also, I should note here that I'm only reviewing resumes for people in the architecture/landscape/interior design professions--if you are in any field but those, please do not send me a resume.)

Here's our first resume, a really good one from A.R. A.R.'s resume has a lot going for it. First, the formatting: despite all of her honors and activities, it's at one page. Second, she's using a good clear font and using font size as well as regular, bold, and italic type to set up and prioritize the information. The tinted rectangles that surround her section headings ("Education", "Skillset", etc.) further prioritize and organize the information.
The format of the text and info in the first entry under "Community" has a nice feel to it; the way the experience description flows after the location is almost newspaper-like. It can also save her a couple of lines if she starts to run out of room. Also useful is how certain items on the resume are in bold, such as certain awards, experiences, and her skillset. Bolding bits of content in your resume can make those items jump out at a potential interviewer.
Let's look at content for a bit. Bear in mind that A.R. only graduated from college a year ago, but this resume looks really impressive. She's included and summed up her work experience and included community and professional organization activities and honors. What's great about including this info is that it provides a fuller picture of this job applicant, and it does so in a way that is more professional and relevant than the old "Hobbies and Interests" section on 20th-century resumes. Not only does she tell someone what she's into in her free time (leading tutorials on rendering, raising recycling awareness, initiates a materials library), she provides personal information that can be used positively in a professional setting (wow, she can get stuff started and keep it going, lots of experience at working with others and keeping things organized). She's filled things about a bit with her Skillset section, which is a great place to show what she knows and how much she knows it. This section can be really important--remember, there are a lot of you out there right now looking for a small number of jobs, so if you're really good at certain types of software or languages or whatever, highlight them to set yourself apart from the pack.
Most of what I see in A.R.'s resume are words and phrases that could be nudged or changed a little bit as well as some grammar and punctuation changes. I also am not sure what a couple of the items were under Awards and Organizations, so if there's a way for A.R. to describe those a little more clearly, then more power to her.
A.R.'s resume was in black text with some red on it in a few places, but overall it's a simple document. Some of your friends or colleagues may have amazing documents that are feats of elegant graphic design, but don't let that give you stage fright when it comes to designing your own resume. Simple and straight-shooting can be just as effective as some graphic work--think of your resume as a design problem that may not best be solved with an actual drawing. now, if you put some graphic design work into your resume, don't sweat that either. Just make sure that whatever you're designing will read clearly if photocopied in black and white as well as in the color(s) you've printed and that the graphic work doesn't overwhelm (but rather support) the content.
Next post: another resume! In the meantime, if you have an architectural/design profession resume that you'd like for me to review and post on the blog, or any question or topic you'd like to see covered here, feel free to mention it in the comments or email me at the address in the sidebar. Thanks!